Monday, March 7, 2011

Response

Good work. You are on the right path, I agree your book is challenging in the beginning. You have some good points to discuss and you can also look at what was happening in the world around them at that time as well. good support. the one thing I would try and do is bring in a connection as well. this will help round out your writing adn deepen your understanding. good support too.

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